Crushed

In my remote village a long time ago
From town came a man of twenty or so
Set up a smart machine called gristmill
Times have changed but it’s there still.

Every weekend I had to go there to share
A duty that for me became a routine affair
Take a bagful of fresh wheat grain to grind
In the mill that produced flour so refined.

The sound of the crusher was harsh incessant
The attitude of the man was equally indecent
For he made me wait a long while for my turn
The unseemly reason I could never discern.

Despite this touch of forced discomfort
My weekly tryst with the gristmill was of worth
For the floating aroma of freshly ground wheat
Dipped me in cool scent of corn field in summer heat.

When I’m crumbled now under the time’s wheel
I see me standing before the village gristmill
In the midst of cacophony and grinding strife
I can still smell the scent of the crushed life.

Posted : June 3, 2018
June 18, 2020
Contest : Crushed
Sponsor : Anthony Biaanco
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 8:15 PM
Subimal, your amazing imagery always takes my imagination where your poetic pen wants it to go. A textured journey back in time. Your last line provides a brilliant finale to a superb piece! Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Bianco Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 5:26 PM
Very Gritty poem I could almost smell the flour congrats Best wishes Anthony
Mcintosh Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Congrats dear friend and blessings with love, Gina
Chutani Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 4:23 AM
Feeling the scent of crushed life-- imagery of sensitivity. Congrats Subimal. Best Mohan
Smith Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Brilliant write Subimal, great imagery...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 2:07 AM
Thank you, Charlie for visiting and for your encouraging comments.
Sands Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Interesting poem to read Subimal :) Well done :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 2:06 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
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