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Sweet cherry lips crush. Iron-will melts beneath hands hot and hotter nights.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/2/2016 12:18:00 AM
Audrey, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2015 10:37:00 PM
Loved it Audrey..God bless...rajat
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Audrey Garner
Date: 3/7/2015 9:05:00 PM
Thank-you, Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty :) Hope you have a wonderful weekend!
Date: 3/1/2015 8:20:00 PM
Very nice work, Audrey! :) I love the break between hands/hot - it lent a subtle power to the third line. I look forward to seeing more from you!
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Audrey Garner
Date: 3/7/2015 8:57:00 PM
Thank-you so much for commenting, A. H. Sewell/Ms. Sewell. (Which do you prefer?) I love your work and I'm tickled pink that you liked my haiku :)

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