Crush

Sweet cherry lips crush.
Iron-will melts beneath hands
hot and hotter nights.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 2, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Audrey, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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March 1, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Loved it Audrey..God bless...rajat
Garner Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Thank-you, Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty :) Hope you have a wonderful weekend!
Sewell Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Very nice work, Audrey! :) I love the break between hands/hot - it lent a subtle power to the third line. I look forward to seeing more from you!
Garner Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Thank-you so much for commenting, A. H. Sewell/Ms. Sewell. (Which do you prefer?) I love your work and I'm tickled pink that you liked my haiku :)
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