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Crunch Munch Crawl

. Crunch munch crawl crunch munch Crawl defecate crunch much crawl Change is on it's way

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2010 3:23:00 AM

well done, already posted a comment, anther one won't hurt, waiting for a new post,..p.d.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/30/2010 7:28:00 AM

Good circle of existance, Sara! Thanky for commenting my poems and have a nice weekend...Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2010 6:46:00 AM

Very succinct, Sara :) Really enjoyed reading this, lol maybe I can wish to be a caterpillar ;) well, maybe minus the keep on pooping part ;) heehee

Brian Strand

Date: 4/28/2010 11:55:00 PM

The circle of life Sara.Rgds Brian

Peter Churchley

Date: 4/28/2010 2:16:00 PM

very funny....:)

John Freeman

Date: 4/28/2010 8:26:00 AM

Haaa! Great take on the photo Sara, yes a great change on the way. Like when we complete our own spiritual metamorphism. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/27/2010 6:39:00 PM

lol.i can hear the crunch munch ticket eater that counts your tickets at chuckie cheese.that place is still awesome. thanks for the thought. fun haiku. -Always&Forever Lynette

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/27/2010 5:17:00 PM

Dear Sara, Excellent, knowing Raul , He will appreciate YOUR Humor Congratulations YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2010 12:38:00 PM

Sara did you want to use munch in the lines? Either way,thought, munch or much, it works out!! Good ending line. A GREAT change is coming! LUv,andrea

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/27/2010 9:07:00 AM

very nice you write wonderful haikus if for contest good luck best wishes to you faleshia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2010 7:45:00 AM

Well done, have a good one Sara, thanks for my s.m.,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/27/2010 7:16:00 AM

interesting--and funny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 7:03:00 AM

Interesting Sara and I see lots of them in N.J. all Summer long... waiting to become butterflies... good luck if for the contest.. if not... I thoroughly enjoyed today...luv.. Linda-Marie.