Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Crunch Munch Crawl

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                                          Crunch munch crawl crunch munch
                                          Crawl defecate crunch much crawl
                                                   Change is on it's way

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Poet Destroyer A May 4, 2010 at 3:23 AM well done, already posted a comment, anther one won't hurt, waiting for a new post,..p.d.

Gert W. Knop April 30, 2010 at 7:28 AM Good circle of existance, Sara! Thanky for commenting my poems and have a nice weekend...Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 29, 2010 at 6:46 AM Very succinct, Sara :) Really enjoyed reading this, lol maybe I can wish to be a caterpillar ;) well, maybe minus the keep on pooping part ;) heehee

Brian Strand April 28, 2010 at 11:55 PM The circle of life Sara.Rgds Brian

Peter Churchley April 28, 2010 at 2:16 PM very funny....:)

John Freeman April 28, 2010 at 8:26 AM Haaa! Great take on the photo Sara, yes a great change on the way. Like when we complete our own spiritual metamorphism. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Lynette Chachere April 27, 2010 at 6:39 PM lol.i can hear the crunch munch ticket eater that counts your tickets at chuckie cheese.that place is still awesome. thanks for the thought. fun haiku. -Always&Forever Lynette

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire April 27, 2010 at 5:17 PM Dear Sara, Excellent, knowing Raul , He will appreciate YOUR Humor Congratulations YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2010 at 12:38 PM Sara did you want to use munch in the lines? Either way,thought, munch or much, it works out!! Good ending line. A GREAT change is coming! LUv,andrea

Faleshia Murphy April 27, 2010 at 9:07 AM very nice you write wonderful haikus if for contest good luck best wishes to you faleshia

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2010 at 7:45 AM Well done, have a good one Sara, thanks for my s.m.,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse April 27, 2010 at 7:16 AM interesting--and funny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 27, 2010 at 7:03 AM Interesting Sara and I see lots of them in N.J. all Summer long... waiting to become butterflies... good luck if for the contest.. if not... I thoroughly enjoyed today...luv.. Linda-Marie.