Mystic Rose Rose Poet Couplet

Crumpled Thoughts

Tucked away underneath my pillow one simple slip of paper 
with wild words of love written that I could not loose nor taper 

juxtapositions, each other's opposite attracts but when attacked 
the writer goes in hiding the coward in me has been smacked 

Morning arrives to find a broken soldier at the cusp of poetry 
I write down the truth only the truth and then I hide my cutlery 

Deep down I wanted you to find it, with you love is  never free  
I left you for a life, uncrumpling the note I signed it , " Its me!"  

January 15, 2020

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Heather Crismond January 22, 2021 at 7:03 PM Wow, that is a fantastic poem. I feel pain and quiet rage. Then relief. Beautifully written :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury January 17, 2021 at 3:24 PM Lovely poem, enjoyed reading ~ Mala

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2021 at 1:33 PM Ahh!! Very descriptive and expressive work. I wonder if they ever knew of the affection? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Akkina Downing January 15, 2021 at 5:28 PM This is just lovely... :) Mystic Rose Rose January 15, 2021 at 5:49 PM Hello Akkina, nice to see you drop in. Hope your keeping well, thank you for appreciating the poem.

Jan Allison January 15, 2021 at 12:35 PM a poem of many layers Vie, it could have been written about me:-) hugs jan xx Mystic Rose Rose January 15, 2021 at 3:49 PM Dear Jan, I think many of us can relate to this one dear. As writers sometimes we have thin skin, but we surprise others and ourselves when things come to push and shove. I think we should be proud of who we are, and never settle for second best. Much love xo

FJ Thomas January 15, 2021 at 11:28 AM Awesomeness Vie. This is so meaningful; especially if one knows you :) Mystic Rose Rose January 15, 2021 at 12:29 PM Dear friend, I'm truly honored with your comment. The fact that you see me through glass makes my heart rejoice, and I love you for it. Stay strong, keep the lantern of your soul full of glimmer, because with light, nothing ever grows dimmer. Especially not friendships, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2021 at 7:59 AM - Its me ... and I love it, Vie Rose :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mystic Rose Rose January 15, 2021 at 12:29 PM Dear Sunshine, how great it is to see your ray today, May you be blessed with a wonderful weekend too. Love and hugs xo