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Crumpled Thoughts

Tucked away underneath my pillow one simple slip of paper with wild words of love written that I could not loose nor taper juxtapositions, each other's opposite attracts but when attacked the writer goes in hiding the coward in me has been smacked Morning arrives to find a broken soldier at the cusp of poetry I write down the truth only the truth and then I hide my cutlery Deep down I wanted you to find it, with you love is never free I left you for a life, uncrumpling the note I signed it , " Its me!" January 15, 2020

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Heather Crismond

Date: 1/22/2021 7:03:00 PM

Wow, that is a fantastic poem. I feel pain and quiet rage. Then relief. Beautifully written :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 1/17/2021 3:24:00 PM

Lovely poem, enjoyed reading ~ Mala

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2021 1:33:00 PM

Ahh!! Very descriptive and expressive work. I wonder if they ever knew of the affection? Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/15/2021 5:28:00 PM

This is just lovely... :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2021 5:49:00 PM

Hello Akkina, nice to see you drop in. Hope your keeping well, thank you for appreciating the poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2021 12:35:00 PM

a poem of many layers Vie, it could have been written about me:-) hugs jan xx

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2021 3:49:00 PM

Dear Jan, I think many of us can relate to this one dear. As writers sometimes we have thin skin, but we surprise others and ourselves when things come to push and shove. I think we should be proud of who we are, and never settle for second best. Much love xo

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/15/2021 11:28:00 AM

Awesomeness Vie. This is so meaningful; especially if one knows you :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2021 12:29:00 PM

Dear friend, I'm truly honored with your comment. The fact that you see me through glass makes my heart rejoice, and I love you for it. Stay strong, keep the lantern of your soul full of glimmer, because with light, nothing ever grows dimmer. Especially not friendships, xo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 7:59:00 AM

- Its me ... and I love it, Vie Rose :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/15/2021 12:29:00 PM

Dear Sunshine, how great it is to see your ray today, May you be blessed with a wonderful weekend too. Love and hugs xo