Crumbling Dreams

With my dreams crumbling around me
What does my mind see, nothing but confusion

With my life seeming to have no future
Is it all a delusion

With no hope in sight
What is my conclusion

Would be to end this dreadful flight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 26, 2011 at 3:23 PM
Very powerful and emotional. It really makes one sad. Very nice piece. I hope that hope becomes your friend.
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