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Crumbling Dreams

With my dreams crumbling around me What does my mind see, nothing but confusion With my life seeming to have no future Is it all a delusion With no hope in sight What is my conclusion Would be to end this dreadful flight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/26/2011 3:23:00 PM
Very powerful and emotional. It really makes one sad. Very nice piece. I hope that hope becomes your friend.
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