William Kelii Kekaula Poet Than-Bauk

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Poetic Form: Than Bauk
Inspired: 2024 September 01
Image: San Juan Skyline

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  A special-Ty
license pla-Te had
  been sen-T to him.

He was ve-Ry
       pleased with I-t when
                        the sh-Ipment came.

                                                                          At the airpor-T
                                                                             used credi-T card
                                                                                 buy firs-T class seat.

Went to first clas-S
      lounge for drink-S of
                                their Hou-Se Champagne.

Onboard the P-lane
     it was sh-Aking
                a B-it scary.

  Nice aeria-L
    shows centra-L parts
                           home-Land of mines.

                                                                           Puerto Ric-O
                                                                                I am h-Ome at
                                                                                    last, O-h I'm blest.

San Juan is stil-L
                          so a-Live like
                             mobi-Le peppers.

   Arecib-O
Radar N-Oted
 cause f-Or its size.
  
Ponce is -A
         nice sort-A place
                             at -Our south point.

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Paula Goldsmith September 2, 2024 at 12:18 PM I enjoyed reading your fun/creative write. Great Picture... "Good Luck"  Have a wonderful day writing away.................. William Kelii Kekaula September 2, 2024 at 1:42 PM Doubly thank yous, Paulam for your visiting and sharing. Aloha William

Tom Cunningham September 2, 2024 at 7:15 AM Looks a tricky form to write Hilo, very creative. Tom William Kelii Kekaula September 2, 2024 at 10:46 AM Agreed Tom, Kim's re sound of alpabet than syllable affects tangible challenge. I appreciate your sharing. Aloha William

Victor Buhagiar September 2, 2024 at 1:50 AM Is this for some contest? I am still trying to understand the dynamics of this write-up, yet I am marvelled at the ideas you have presented. Well writ. William Kelii Kekaula September 2, 2024 at 2:11 AM Yes, Kim's 'Than Bauk' contest, and there's a monkey loose/twist--foundational properties remain, but, rhymed syllable-OUT/alphabet sound-IN, hence my write of capitalization of the alpha sound in play, oppose to the natural CAPS.