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Poetic Form: Than Bauk
Inspired: 2024 September 01
Image: San Juan Skyline

Colonial architecture. South Mumbai, India : r/CityPorn

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A special-Ty license pla-Te had been sen-T to him.
He was ve-Ry pleased with I-t when the sh-Ipment came.
At the airpor-T used credi-T card buy firs-T class seat.
Went to first clas-S lounge for drink-S of their Hou-Se Champagne.
Onboard the P-lane it was sh-Aking a B-it scary.
Nice aeria-L shows centra-L parts home-Land of mines.
Puerto Ric-O I am h-Ome at last, O-h I'm blest.
San Juan is stil-L so a-Live like mobi-Le peppers.
Arecib-O Radar N-Oted cause f-Or its size.
Ponce is -A nice sort-A place at -Our south point.

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Date: 9/2/2024 12:18:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun/creative write. Great Picture... "Good Luck"  Have a wonderful day writing away..................
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/2/2024 1:42:00 PM
Doubly thank yous, Paulam for your visiting and sharing. Aloha William
Date: 9/2/2024 7:15:00 AM
Looks a tricky form to write Hilo, very creative. Tom
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Date: 9/2/2024 10:46:00 AM
Agreed Tom, Kim's re sound of alpabet than syllable affects tangible challenge. I appreciate your sharing. Aloha William
Date: 9/2/2024 1:50:00 AM
Is this for some contest? I am still trying to understand the dynamics of this write-up, yet I am marvelled at the ideas you have presented. Well writ.
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Date: 9/2/2024 2:11:00 AM
Yes, Kim's 'Than Bauk' contest, and there's a monkey loose/twist--foundational properties remain, but, rhymed syllable-OUT/alphabet sound-IN, hence my write of capitalization of the alpha sound in play, oppose to the natural CAPS.

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