Crumble

Your world is falling apart,
you hold your broken heart.
You're dying deep inside,
you want to run and hide.
You feel you cannot live,
for what you cannot give.
Your love that's locked away,
your feelings you keep at bay.
You want to scream and shout,
instead you stand and pout.
You stare at the shattered heart,
it's broken and falling apart.
Your world slips between your fingers,
the love that was once there lingers.
Your eyes they start to tear,
your soul is full of fear.
You cowar on the floor,
your eyes are puffy and sore.
For days and hours you cry,
you feel you want to die.
You don't belong in this world,
in a ball your stomachs curled.
Your world is crashing down,
your eyes glace at the ground.
When you hear a sound,
your heart starts to pound.
You turn around and see,
just what the sound can be.
You feel you're spinning round and round,
your world just flipped upside down.
He picks your heart up off the ground,
which then in turn starts to pound.
The peices then start to bend,
you feel your heart will finally mend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/6/2011 9:20:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your excellent writing today Racquel. I hope you always find the inspiration to help you continue writing your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2011 8:53:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your creative write Raquel and its stunning rhyme sequence in this emotional poem.. feeling the intensity in every line luv..
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