Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

Crumbeled 2-27-10

crumbeled...
i fall, 
i break,
words escape me...
have you ever been so hurt? 
that your words dont even work?
crumbeled...
i hide,
i die,
i wont let him see...
the pain is crushing my heart.
the pain is tearing my soul apart.
crumbeled...
all i am,
is ashes,
to be left alone...
until forgotten

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Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2010 at 10:28 AM Have you ever heard (Runaway Train) From Soul Assylum. that is the way My soul feels always. So I hear you. I to only love whats mine. Do you ever feel you hide behind your poetry. Like this poem of yours Crumbeled.

Jimmy Anderson March 1, 2010 at 10:28 AM Make sure in your letter to let me know if your mom and dad is cool with me writing once or so every other week. and if I can send you pixs K? Send me some ...I'll be waiting I'll tell Audrey to put you as a friend on my facebook...you see my 3 pixs on there? Later Lil Momma

Jimmy Anderson February 28, 2010 at 2:10 PM Hey, lil sister!... I've asked Audrey to post these comments for me.... So sorry about this. Please don't be too sad. Things will work out. There is so much ahead of you. .... Big bro., Jimmy

Audrey Haick February 27, 2010 at 6:59 PM Hey Rain, I sincerely feel your pain in this write, been there too, in fact, several times. I am very sorry. Nothing I can say will make you feel better, I know, but it will surely pass, ok? Take care. Peace, Audrey

Susan Palli February 27, 2010 at 6:26 AM appropiate title