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Cruel World

life isn’t fun
infact it’s very stressful
sometimes you want a gun
cause it’s hard to be successful

I can’t deal with the work
I don’t want to waste all my time 
just so that one day
I could be sublime

in the world’s eye’s that is
 that’s what we have to live up to
the world’s expectations 
here is a little preview

perfect skin 
perfect shape 
when we all become twins
the expectations change 

and yet we all still follow
the ways of this cruel world
it’s hard for me to swallow 
the ways life has unfurled

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/9/2016 7:46:00 AM
Carter, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2016 2:42:00 AM
Hi, Crater ..I was hoping to see a new poem from you... Linda
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Date: 9/8/2016 1:40:00 PM
Carter, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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