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Cruel World

*~*...When I Tried To Make Things Right..*~*
*~*...People Just Pushed Me Aside....*~*
*~*...This Cruel World Is So Unfair...*~* 
*~*...I Wonder How Much More I Have To Bear...*~*
*~*...Life Is Life Always Playing It's Favourite Game...*~*
*~*...Either You Fly OR Will Be Burned In Flames...*~*

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Rizwan Ejaz

November 25, 2011 at 11:59 PM

Well done jameela.Cruel worls is not a ordinary work.Keep it up.

Earle Brown

November 18, 2011 at 5:38 PM

Create your own world; one that is meaningful to you. Let poetry be your companion. Write about everything: love, hatred, God, war, peace, the trees, the birds, the desert, the ocean, family, people, religion, school, politics, dreams, today, yesterday. Create your own world with writing. People will listen to you.

Jameela Farouk

November 19, 2011 at 2:04 PM

trying to create my own world where sadness doesn't even dare's to drags my sprite down im holding on trying my best to be strong ....

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 11:21 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Jameela. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Jameela Farouk

November 19, 2011 at 2:06 PM

Hope Soo...n thnkxx alot dear ...and my good wishes are with you stay blessed...