Crucified

in love
he held hands out
wore the flowerless crown
and hung on the branches of faith
ignored

jesusspiritualcinquain

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Kim Merryman

July 27, 2021 at 5:32 AM

So much said in such few words. A beautiful cinquain, Sandra! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

July 26, 2021 at 1:47 AM

A beautiful Cinquain on the redeemer. Congratulations!

Juliet Ligon

October 1, 2013 at 3:46 PM

"Branches of faith". What faith it took for Jesus to trust His father's plan for salvation, and what amazing faith we are saved by!

Richard Lamoureux

September 29, 2013 at 12:00 PM

This is so moving! I feel blessed reading it.

Karen Anglesey

September 29, 2013 at 9:51 AM

Wow Sandra, such a stunning portrayal of the crucifiction. Superb write

Nette Onclaud

September 28, 2013 at 11:57 AM

bold write, sandra... the pleaure and pain of affection so well expressed!.. thanks for passin through.. :) huggs

Carrie Richards

September 28, 2013 at 9:56 AM

What a powerful and amazing few words! Wow!

Liam Mcdaid

September 27, 2013 at 4:19 PM

such a powerful piece in few words

Sara Kendrick

September 27, 2013 at 10:53 AM

Perfection indeed…You speak of His love for us in that while we were yet sinners he died for us..Sara

Joseph May

September 27, 2013 at 6:50 AM

powerful write Sandra...well written...

Andrea Dietrich

September 26, 2013 at 9:56 PM

LIke Jack here says, this has great impact. That last line nailed it. (Just realized that made a bad pun after I said it!!!) I think you did a splendid cinquain.