Crows

A gray foggy day
Crows are looking for shelter
Cannot find their rest

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Poet Destroyer A

December 8, 2012 at 6:32 PM

I know it does not matter,,,but i miss you my dear poet... you were always so nice to me.. always~ LINDA

Jasmine Jade Scott

May 3, 2010 at 3:09 PM

I love crows! There my mothers favorite bird. I wish there was more to read:)

Gert W. Knop

December 12, 2012 at 8:54 AM

Sorry for the late reply, but I have been very busy with other things! I recently compiled a volume of poems with illustrations which will be publis´hed sonn (in Germany). All the best and have a great Christmas!

Edward Orozco

April 30, 2010 at 2:29 PM

we all can connect to this one way or another thanks for sharing today!

Gert W. Knop

December 12, 2012 at 8:55 AM

Thank you Edward four kind comment! have a great Christmas!!!

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2010 at 8:48 AM

Good one. I imagine the crows all confused by that fog!

Gert W. Knop

December 12, 2012 at 8:58 AM

Hi Andrea, I guess its really time now to comment on your posting! Yes, they truely are! At the mom,ent I am workin onm several projects an an art-book with my illistrations and poems will be printed now. I'm looking forward to it! Have a great Christmas and New Year!...Gert:)

Poet Destroyer A

April 17, 2010 at 4:19 AM

A real thick gray for them crows. Nice one.

Gert W. Knop

December 12, 2012 at 8:59 AM

Thank you PD and take care...Gert:)

Doris Culverhouse

April 16, 2010 at 4:36 AM

I always wonder how animals make it through the storms and cold. They do though!! amazing!!

Gert W. Knop

December 12, 2012 at 9:01 AM

Yes Doris its quite amazing, isn't it? Today I observed a lone blackbird looging for food! I guesee it was finally successful! Have a great Christmas and New Year!

Sara Kendrick

April 9, 2010 at 5:07 AM

As are many people...looking for rest but can't find it...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Gert W. Knop

December 12, 2012 at 9:04 AM

Hi Sara, Thank you for your kind comment. I hab´ven't posted much recently on Soup, but was quite occupied with other things and a special art-book with my illustrations and poems will be edited this year...I'm really looking forward to it! Wishing you a peaceful Christmas and New Year!

Raul Moreno

April 7, 2010 at 10:16 PM

The dense fog does this to many animals, nice work...Raul

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 7, 2010 at 9:41 PM

Great Haiku Gert... I could just see those crows looking for shelter.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire

April 7, 2010 at 5:29 PM

There's something haunting about this gray image, Gert. I'm thinking of Edgar Allen Poe...no, wait, that was a raven. LOL Quite an interesting portrait of the birds moving through the fog! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

April 7, 2010 at 5:19 PM

we have had beautiful sunshine, we need some rain now to wash the pollen away.

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