Kurt Ravidas Poet Senryu

Crows

your former lovers 
don't share memories of you... 
crows hide stolen rings

10.07.2019
Senryu About Greed, Lust Or Loss. Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Syllables Per Line:	5 7 5

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Paul Callus July 17, 2019 at 12:12 PM Very creative, Kurt. Congratulations on your podium finish. regards // paul

Probir Gupta July 16, 2019 at 10:55 PM Cannot help smiling as I arrive at the third line ... Beautiful ... Congratulations ...

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2019 at 6:07 PM Congrats to you!

Jeanne Mcgee July 16, 2019 at 12:16 AM Congratulations Kurt. Nicely done Kurt Ravidas July 16, 2019 at 7:20 AM Thank you, Jeanne. Glad to see you)

Kim Rodrigues July 15, 2019 at 7:20 PM Congratulations on your wow-ku! Kurt Ravidas July 16, 2019 at 7:00 AM Arigatou, Kim-chan)

Tania Kitchin July 15, 2019 at 6:48 PM Kurt, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu! Kurt Ravidas July 16, 2019 at 6:58 AM Thank you very much, Tania. Good luck to you and contests. Ray of love)

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2019 at 3:05 PM a clever one.

Andrea Dietrich July 10, 2019 at 3:05 PM very clever! Kurt Ravidas July 10, 2019 at 3:51 PM Thanks a lot, Andrea. I love your double. It's a good omen)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 9, 2019 at 9:47 PM I think Tania is going to really like this one. Great write, good luck in the contest. Kurt Ravidas July 10, 2019 at 3:49 PM Thank you, M.M. Hoping to see you too in Tania's contest)