Crows

your former lovers don't share memories of you... crows hide stolen rings 10.07.2019 Senryu About Greed, Lust Or Loss. Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllables Per Line: 5 7 5

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2019 12:12:00 PM

Very creative, Kurt. Congratulations on your podium finish. regards // paul

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/16/2019 10:55:00 PM

Cannot help smiling as I arrive at the third line ... Beautiful ... Congratulations ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:07:00 PM

Congrats to you!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/16/2019 12:16:00 AM

Congratulations Kurt. Nicely done

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/16/2019 7:20:00 AM

Thank you, Jeanne. Glad to see you)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2019 7:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your wow-ku!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/16/2019 7:00:00 AM

Arigatou, Kim-chan)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/15/2019 6:48:00 PM

Kurt, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever senryu!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/16/2019 6:58:00 AM

Thank you very much, Tania. Good luck to you and contests. Ray of love)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2019 3:05:00 PM

very clever!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/10/2019 3:51:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Andrea. I love your double. It's a good omen)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2019 3:05:00 PM

a clever one.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/9/2019 9:47:00 PM

I think Tania is going to really like this one. Great write, good luck in the contest.

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/10/2019 3:49:00 PM

Thank you, M.M. Hoping to see you too in Tania's contest)