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Crownless

Their heads hang lowest Conquered by reality I watch Crownless Kings

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Skat A

Date: 5/22/2016 5:45:00 PM

James, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/10/2010 12:52:00 PM

yes i like this one " conquered by reality" is probably this best most honest one line of poetry ever.

Date: 12/28/2009 4:40:00 PM

Says so much about life in just three lines. Much for the reader to ponder about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Happy New Year! Keep on writing. Karen

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/24/2009 7:23:00 PM

Tell you what, James. Me thinks this is an awesome Senryu. -Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2009 6:30:00 PM

Don't know much about senryu, but me likes!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/24/2009 3:50:00 PM

Love the second line. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara