Crownless

Their heads hang lowest
                    Conquered by reality
I watch Crownless Kings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 22, 2016 at 5:45 PM
James, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"
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February 10, 2010 at 12:52 PM
yes i like this one " conquered by reality" is probably this best most honest one line of poetry ever.
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December 28, 2009 at 4:40 PM
Says so much about life in just three lines. Much for the reader to ponder about. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words on my poem. Happy New Year! Keep on writing. Karen
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December 24, 2009 at 7:23 PM
Tell you what, James. Me thinks this is an awesome Senryu. -Robert
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 6:30 PM
Don't know much about senryu, but me likes!
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December 24, 2009 at 3:50 PM
Love the second line. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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