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Crowded Our Space

Crowded Our Space  by Sue k Green


Space
Space sufficient
Sufficient for all

All
All gathered
Gathered in masses

Masses
Masses crowded
Crowded our space

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Darren Watson

Date: 2/5/2014 10:32:00 AM

In little country villages like mine . Life is slow and easy Then I drive to a city like York or Leeds and I wonder how all those people don't suffocate being so close to each other. Loved the poem, Thank you

Sue K Green
Date: 2/5/2014 2:45:00 PM

I'm located in NJ, one hour from NYC and about 2 from Philadelphia. Not many open spaces left here. Many of the small farms are being sold for commercial buildings.

David Fisher

Date: 2/4/2014 8:13:00 PM

This is a great write, Sue! Sounds like the circle of strife.

Sue K Green
Date: 2/5/2014 7:15:00 AM

I look at scenes of the Old West and see all the open space and then I see the reality of even local farms being replaced with strip malls here in all ready crowded NJ.