Brian Strand Poet Shape

Crosswise- My Faith

That day                 you have              died
Crucified                 for all                   for me
You cried                on the cross          completely
Finished                  a way                   made free

Finished                  a way                   made free
You rose                 to share                your spirit
To give                   by grace                to me
New Life                 your light               to see

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Sharon Winter November 10, 2008 at 6:26 AM So amazingly beautiful. Love, Shar

Michael Torres November 9, 2008 at 10:26 PM Brian this is another exception as always. Nice illustration of words. I love your message here. This one brings blessings to you how did I miss it. Thanks for you sincere comments Michael Torres

Joseph Spence Sr November 9, 2008 at 12:15 PM This is very ingenious. I like the topography and the flow of the words. This is very impacting. Just imagine what the world would be like if not for the resurrection and ascension? Great job! ~Joseph

Diane Christian November 9, 2008 at 11:25 AM hiya thanks for your feed back on my poetry, yes I read this earlier and think it is great, it is so uplifitg and I pray others see the truth in your wonderful write, God bles from diane

Diane Christian November 9, 2008 at 8:37 AM what a beautiful write, so full of truth, God bless you from diane

Kristin Reynolds November 9, 2008 at 4:30 AM Amen, Brian. I was just speaking to my kids about this yesterday, how even though they crucified Christ, he still had nothing but love. A perfect poem, on a timeless subject - nothing but love. :) Thanks for lightening my heart this am, love Kristin