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Crossroads

Together we walked, Side by side awhile – You, on your road, I, on my sidewalk; You, in pursuit of dreams yonder, I, caught up in my thoughts at hand. Somewhere down the road, we came to a crossroads and you chose to take a different course, turned your back on me and walked away. My path led me down a dead-end street, I turned around and walked my way back and found you standing, Lost and beside yourself at the very juncture from where we went our separate ways! Oh, whither do we go now? ~Contest: Crossroads Shape ~Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 10/18/2021 10:48:00 AM
Very creative Adbul. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/18/2021 4:25:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2021 12:19:00 PM
what a creative poem on so many levels Abdul, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/16/2021 3:28:00 PM
You are the one, Jan, who gets to the core of my poems. Thanks.
Date: 10/16/2021 10:42:00 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write/shape. Love It. Have a blessed autumn day...............
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/16/2021 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Paula. Greatly appreciate.
Date: 10/16/2021 8:56:00 AM
The crossroad has led to a happy end? Congratulations!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/16/2021 3:27:00 PM
It wasn't a happy ending. We were back at the crossroads!
Date: 10/16/2021 7:40:00 AM
Took me a second to figure out the crossroads scheme then led me to the question we all have asked at one time or another....Nicely done Abdul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/16/2021 3:25:00 PM
It took you a second, but you did! That's all that matter. lol
Date: 10/16/2021 6:33:00 AM
Abdul, I love your unique crossroads shape. The shape indeed furthers the message of your poem! Congratulations! A fave for me!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/16/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thanks Kim, appreciate much. Glad you liked it. More than the shape, I wonder what one would do at this juncture?!

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