Crossroads

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*Image by Pixabay. C R R O O A S D S S pped am I -- ... -- I am feel a S - CLU - S i r I - TTE - I n t N - RED - N g /\ SIN Ugh SIN | | ~in-boxed | up-caged~ \/ A A M M AND E E N N v__V--_-__Vv______v_ --- V _v_ __-__-__v__--- _______ ____vV_________VVv______--___Vv____- 2021 January 13 (Original title: Power of Prayer) *Crossroads: "I am feeling caged-up, boxed-in, trapped am I, cluttered, ugh! Sin, sin, sin, sin, AMEN AND AMEN".

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2021 12:54:00 PM

this sure is creative all right. i did not quite get all the words in the box, but I love the idea of this shape poem!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/18/2021 1:51:00 PM

Ok, Andrea, "boxed-in, trapped am I, I am feeling caged-up, sin-sin-sin-sin, cluttered, ugh! AMEN (loosely spaced)... ", I pray your eyes are empowered my friend, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2021 12:59:00 AM

- Creative prayer, William :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/14/2021 1:41:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, praying this be our better year, Aloha!