Crossing Over

some say the dead are lost souls without vessels ~ life on a doomed dinghy

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2023 2:05:00 PM

Very creatively put together work. Some people are always wrong and some people get it right sometime. Thanks for sharing this extraordinary work and for stopping by my page. Sara

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/15/2023 12:58:00 AM

Thank you Sara, probably a political dig going on behind the scenes here, I’m sure more can be done to try sort out the mess it is, cheers David

Yann Rolland

Date: 8/9/2023 3:13:00 PM

may be, there is no difference between life and death, a deep monoku to think about, thanks

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/9/2023 3:26:00 PM

In the migrant boat sinking sense, crossing over is pretty much the same, thank you Yann, cheers David