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"crossed Lines"

Lines we've crossed in life

                that put our souls in a place

                                        to speak with no lines...






The "Line" contest...by Paula Swanson

Copyright © Michael J. Falotico | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/23/2010 4:48:00 PM Nice Michael, the truth is in ever line in our lives. Good luck in the contest,..p.d. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 9/23/2010 2:23:00 PM Oh wow! Looks like we had the same trend of thought, Michael! Good luck in Paula's "Line" Contest! Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/22/2010 2:46:00 PM I wouldn't change a word, Michael. This is awesome! Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/21/2010 6:07:00 PM More awesome ..speaks volumes Michael and so intricate in its meaning luv.. enjoyed very much your perspective ..luv.. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/21/2010 6:07:00 PM Good luck if for Paula's contest my White Knight... Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/21/2010 7:45:00 AM Very wonderful write on the theme of line, Michael Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/21/2010 4:41:00 AM Wow, one has no choice but to think further while reading just the words to this piece Michael.. Very insightful, lv Wilma ps: a fav once again Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 9/20/2010 5:05:00 PM hope you did not see the other comment...I got my wires crossed! sorry. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/20/2010 2:52:00 PM Deep meaning behind this poem, Michael. I sometimes toe the line, but am wary of crossing it. Excellent entry for the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/20/2010 2:49:00 PM Reads like a great winner to me..Good luck in the contest...I am glad that I chose this one to read tonight..Sara Login to Reply