Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

"crossed Lines"

Lines we've crossed in life

                that put our souls in a place

                                        to speak with no lines...






The "Line" contest...by Paula Swanson

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Poet Destroyer A September 23, 2010 at 4:48 PM Nice Michael, the truth is in ever line in our lives. Good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Audrey Haick September 23, 2010 at 2:23 PM Oh wow! Looks like we had the same trend of thought, Michael! Good luck in Paula's "Line" Contest! Peace, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire September 22, 2010 at 2:46 PM I wouldn't change a word, Michael. This is awesome! Thanks for your comments. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 21, 2010 at 6:07 PM More awesome ..speaks volumes Michael and so intricate in its meaning luv.. enjoyed very much your perspective ..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 21, 2010 at 6:07 PM Good luck if for Paula's contest my White Knight...

Dr.Ram Mehta September 21, 2010 at 7:45 AM Very wonderful write on the theme of line, Michael

Wilma Neels September 21, 2010 at 4:41 AM Wow, one has no choice but to think further while reading just the words to this piece Michael.. Very insightful, lv Wilma ps: a fav once again

Doris Culverhouse September 20, 2010 at 5:05 PM hope you did not see the other comment...I got my wires crossed! sorry.

Carolyn Devonshire September 20, 2010 at 2:52 PM Deep meaning behind this poem, Michael. I sometimes toe the line, but am wary of crossing it. Excellent entry for the contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2010 at 2:49 PM Reads like a great winner to me..Good luck in the contest...I am glad that I chose this one to read tonight..Sara