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Cross Roads

On a hot and dusty day, my feet carry me far away. With nothing in sight but blue skies, thoughts run ramped through my mind. Praying to my father and friend above, Searching for the meaning of love. Thought I had it at one point in time. Now I have a tangled mind. She was cheating how could this be? My heart is broken, my tears are dried. A cross roads lies up ahead. What direction should I go? I love her so much it hurts to do, but why should I come back to you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/18/2012 11:36:00 AM
This has nice flow. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/28/2011 12:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "CrossRoads of your Life" contest Cory. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 12:09:00 AM
Good on ya Cory
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Date: 11/25/2011 9:20:00 PM
Congrats Cory on a marvelous win luv.. excellent poetry.. like your Avatar..am having a problem posting mine.. HELP..luv..can u??
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Date: 11/28/2011 12:45:00 PM
upload pic and that should be it.. :)
Date: 11/25/2011 3:40:00 PM
catch another bloody horse, (lover) saddle up n ride of course, all through the starry night, the cure that's right.... drunken johnson in the bar was told by shiela, "you galah, toss her off ya shoulder mate! " so i did accelerate, caught a dozen tch tch...
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Date: 11/14/2011 11:33:00 PM
Frank ought to really like this cross roads poem, Cory. I am ok. It's been a very bad year for me but life is not as bad as for others that have it so hard! (and how are YOU?)
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Date: 11/14/2011 3:15:00 PM
Take a right, or take a left. Either way your loves bereft. Tomorrow's coming evermore. As yesterday closes today's door. But love is for the hopeful sinner. If you find it again then you're a winner.
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Date: 11/14/2011 1:58:00 PM
Those questions always haunt us after a breakup, Cory. This is a beautifully written entry for Frank's contest. (Check spelling in title) I'm sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:27:00 PM
another great right cory. You have such a gift with words. I envy your talent. :)
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Date: 11/13/2011 6:48:00 PM
I am not sure if this is a personal write..if it is...infidelity can be cured with God's help over time..I know this personally...trust and faithfulness are God's gifts to us and we can model these after Him and restore what was lost. It is not easy and takes much time..Restoring the Fallen gives a framework to use if the other person is willing. Hugs, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/13/2011 4:25:00 PM
Good question. Well said.
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Date: 11/12/2011 10:22:00 PM
cory,,, wow...this is a tough one. even for me...take care,..p.d.
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