Crocodile Tears

hanky to dry eye
I join the thick drift
mourning my foe's death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 18, 2009 at 11:12 AM
I have read your poetry and enjoyed it. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. You have done an excellent job writing this poem. May you have a wonderful and inspiring weekend Patricia. Love, Carol
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September 17, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Sad Haiku. Sara
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