Critique
Mirror image of attitude
Desperation left a space
Overbearing love
Beaten to the chase
A negative issue
The new all time low
Nurturing the tattered heart
From a story you don’t know
Make it happen
There is reward
I’ll show you my soul
You bring the sword
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