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Cristovão Paganini With such beauty that is truly divine, Which I had wished was mine all mine; Of a blessed sound containing rare form, That within my heart has created a storm. Vivaldi of vigor reflected by violin strums And vibrant beating of virulent drums, All around marvelous music was reflecting As great as the person who it is directing. Truly gladly want to hear again and again; What a wonderful day mine must have been, God vividly gave Vivaldi this music to write, To hear its vivaciousness me He did invite. James Thomas Horn Retired Veteran and Poet https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RMHguvZPcqQ

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Date: 2/17/2016 7:43:00 PM
James, you're getting much better, I'll give you a 4 for this one, because the poem flowed from beginning to end. I see you like music and dance. Do we hear about the dance lessons in your next one?
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Date: 2/18/2016 4:39:00 AM
Unbroken Promise, Check out my re-write and you might improve the rating a bit so of rage I won't have a fit. Jim Horn
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:47:00 PM
RP. No, not quite. I am now over 2,200 poems. That was a fast response. You will have to listen to music while reading my poem. Jim

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