Crisp Fall Rain

crisp - fall - swift - cloudburst
soaks camouflaged covered earth…
teasing undergrowth

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 22, 2012 at 4:56 PM
Carly, stopping by to wish you a happy thanksgiving,,, always~ pd
Susan Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 7:54 AM
lovely images and words - love teasing :) i bet debbie will love this!
Maverick Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 3:35 PM
This is sending the undergrowth craazy:) good one Caryl..
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 3:48 PM
I really like that image of teasing undergrowth, Caryl. Good luck in the contest.
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November 13, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Carly, lovely... Good luck in the contest..p.d
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November 13, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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