Crimson Wings

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rising to the skies red wings amongst evergreens butterfly unrest a citrine sun quest off to sweet destinations sounds of noonday gong shadows are waiting the day is so still and warm save flurries of red

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/3/2021 7:15:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, I enjoy reading you because I know I'm going to seeing the the written word come to life before my eyes. Nothing is dull, everything has much color. I could just picture tall evergreens. Good content and imagery. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/3/2021 7:41:00 PM

Hi Alexis, Your words thrill me! I am so inspired that reading my work is a vivid experience for you. Thank you for your kind thoughts. You have a wonderful evening, too. :) Evelyn

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/3/2021 1:59:00 PM

I just love the way you use colors in your poems, Evelyn! It makes your words "pop" like a pop of color in a room! Sending you a "pop of color" for spring and a blessing on butterfly wings!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/3/2021 7:44:00 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful gift of color, Sam, and for your elating comment. :=)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/2/2021 11:15:00 PM

Seems a storm is brewing. Even the butterflies are restless.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/3/2021 7:33:00 AM

So, enjoy the lovely calm. :=)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/2/2021 6:56:00 PM

Exceptionally nice work, Evelyn. I also loved the illustrations!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/2/2021 7:34:00 PM

I'm thrilled that you did. Thank you, L Milton.