Crimson Wings

rising to the skies
red wings amongst evergreens
butterfly unrest

a citrine sun quest
off to sweet destinations
sounds of noonday gong

shadows are waiting
the day is so still and warm
save flurries of red

beautifulbutterflyflyinggreenredhaiku

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Alexis Y.

March 3, 2021 at 7:15 PM

Hi Evelyn, I enjoy reading you because I know I'm going to seeing the the written word come to life before my eyes. Nothing is dull, everything has much color. I could just picture tall evergreens. Good content and imagery. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 3, 2021 at 7:41 PM

Hi Alexis, Your words thrill me! I am so inspired that reading my work is a vivid experience for you. Thank you for your kind thoughts. You have a wonderful evening, too. :) Evelyn

Sam Kauffman

March 3, 2021 at 1:59 PM

I just love the way you use colors in your poems, Evelyn! It makes your words "pop" like a pop of color in a room! Sending you a "pop of color" for spring and a blessing on butterfly wings!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 3, 2021 at 7:44 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful gift of color, Sam, and for your elating comment. :=)