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Crimson Tides

Crimson tides remember what we are,  
beneath the bridge where spring begins to glow;  
the ocean aches for all that drifts too far.

New buds unfold like veins beneath a star,  
a first flush learning how to grow;  
crimson tides remember what we are.

Your name rides in the light, a guiding star,  
no longer wound, but life in steady flow;  
the ocean aches for all that drifts too far.

Where waves and morning light align afar,  
new shoots unfurl and grow below;  
crimson tides remember what we are.

The bridge holds more than rust and scar—  
it holds the chance to reconnect, to show;  
the ocean aches for all that drifts too far.

So spring leans close, no longer just a scar,  
each wave a pulse, each breath we come to know;  
crimson tides remember what we are,  
the ocean aches for all that drifts too far.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Volumes Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 7:53 AM
Alison this is a gorgeous poem, 'twas my delight to read it twice. Super writing.
Smith  Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 3:48 PM
Thank you so much
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:03 PM
faving THIS
Hind Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 12:09 AM
<3
Smith  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:16 PM
Thank you Paige you are my fav.
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 3:00 PM
Alison, a beautiful poem, nicely done.
Smith  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:16 PM
Thank you Tania your comment is much appreciated
Knox Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 7:51 PM
Sounds like if you put a tune to this poem, you can make music. I like the title and the imagery. Good work.
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 7:54 PM
Thank you Phillip, I have added music to some of my poems already.
Delegans Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 4:12 PM
This is such a great poem, Alison. My fav stanza: The bridge holds more than rust and scar— it holds the chance to reconnect, to show; the ocean aches for all that drifts too far. You are very diverse in your poetic talents.
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 5:40 PM
Thanks Christopher. I do like to try different styles.
Croft Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 2:50 PM
beautiful, i am very found of poems that talk about the ocean or water!
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 5:38 PM
Thanks Karen
Scragg Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 8:47 AM
Beautifully written. :-D
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 1:49 PM
Thank you Natasha
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