Carrie Richards Poet Haiku

Crimson Tide

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                                    pink gulls of twilight

                                            circle the hidden cove...

                                                    sand between our toes




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Kiran Bantawa September 25, 2013 at 5:55 PM nice one. congrats.

Sandra Adams September 25, 2013 at 9:12 AM what a beautiful image...congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 25, 2013 at 4:44 AM Congrats on the win in the contest, Carrie

Shadow Hamilton September 25, 2013 at 4:34 AM congrats on win Carrie lovely haiku Shadow x smile

Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2013 at 3:26 AM - Congratulations on your win, Carrie ! - well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2013 at 11:41 PM Fantastico!!!

Skat A September 24, 2013 at 5:47 PM NOTHING BUT BEAUTY!! Carrie, it's an honor ...yes it is!!! Congratulations:) ~~love SKAT

Tahera Mannan April 25, 2013 at 10:41 PM Such an awesome scene. Congrats for this great win.

Andrea Dietrich April 25, 2013 at 6:53 PM an outstanding haiku and well deserved win. congratulations

Isaiah Zerbst April 25, 2013 at 2:42 PM Great to see you win with this one! I think the poem merits it.

Poet Destroyer A April 24, 2013 at 8:06 PM Carrie, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda

Therese Bacha April 24, 2013 at 2:26 PM Very nice Carrie, good for you. Bravo. Love Terry

Heather Ober April 24, 2013 at 10:00 AM As always, you kicked my contest's butt! There isn't a single word here that doesn't belong - it flows seemlessly and creates a magical image. Congratulations, Carrie! Top spot AGAIN!

Judy Konos April 24, 2013 at 7:00 AM Excellent! Congratulations....

Abdulhafeez Oyewole April 23, 2013 at 3:49 PM Congrats on your grand win

Connie Marcum Wong April 23, 2013 at 3:34 PM Congrats on this awesome haiku winning first place!

Donna Jones April 23, 2013 at 12:34 PM Congratulations. Carrie on this magnificent win

Suzanne Delaney April 23, 2013 at 11:29 AM Congratulations Carrie You captured a beautiful moment

Debbie Guzzi April 23, 2013 at 9:58 AM [see me smiling..a haiku!] Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Bernard Colasurdo April 23, 2013 at 9:36 AM Hi Carrie, Perfect image... I love "pink gulls of twilight" beautifully penned. Congrats on a well deserved first place win. : ) Hugs

Painted Hunter April 23, 2013 at 9:07 AM Good stuff, Carrie. Congrats on your big win!

Connie Marcum Wong April 17, 2013 at 7:10 PM This is EXCELLENT Carrie! Twilight is my favorite time of day. I am faving this one.

Charmaine Chircop April 17, 2013 at 3:00 PM Wow so romantic ..my favourite so.far

Kash Poet April 16, 2013 at 1:42 AM Just excellent Carrie!!Love this haiku.

Poet Destroyer A April 15, 2013 at 8:15 PM I like the flow in your haiku Carrie, good luck in the contest..xox~ PD

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