Crimson Sustain

Crimson Sustain

shards of glass
reflecting fault
circling the drain

bubbles in his
crimson bath
bringing end to pain

lingering shadow
of the past
tormenting refrain

the prison of
his dying hope
eternal sustain

By: Jeremy Siedlecki
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 22, 2011 at 5:49 PM
nice write with fine images, jeremy
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