Crimson Skies

You woke too early as always
You took a sip of morning sun
to help you start the day - oh yeah
And now your eyes are golden
Ready for anything
That happens to get in your way

Step into your boots
Tear down the crimson sky 
Before you

Your running through the forest
Tearing up the ground
With every single step you make
Your journey gets you nowhere
You stop to take the deepest breath
Because the view is glorious

Lay down on your back
And watch the crimson sky
Before you

You seem to dance 
You seem to dive
You just can not believe your eyes
You drift on through reality
Save your thoughts
But share with me
You seem to dance 
You seem to dive
You just can not believe your eyes
Your mesmerized this time for sure
You just can't keep it in no more

I feel your heart pound madly
Your so excited
By treasures laying at your door 
And your eyes are still golden
Ready for anything
Embrace life that's for sure

Step into your boots
Hold hands with crimson skies 
Forever
And ever
So beautiful

You seem to dance 
You seem to dive
You just can not believe your eyes
You drift on through reality
Save your thoughts
But share with me
You seem to dance 
You seem to dive
You just can not believe your eyes
Your mesmerized this time for sure
You just can't keep it in no more

By Emma Buckeridge
25.09.2011
Copyright 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/29/2011 12:57:00 PM
Nice and beautiful words... thanks ,..p.d.
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Date: 9/29/2011 9:06:00 AM
I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Emma. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:03:00 AM
Carol, thank you for your lovely comment. You are right, this site is such an inspirational place to be. There are many great poets on here. Thanks again. Emma
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