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Crimson Skies

You woke too early as always You took a sip of morning sun to help you start the day - oh yeah And now your eyes are golden Ready for anything That happens to get in your way Step into your boots Tear down the crimson sky Before you Your running through the forest Tearing up the ground With every single step you make Your journey gets you nowhere You stop to take the deepest breath Because the view is glorious Lay down on your back And watch the crimson sky Before you You seem to dance You seem to dive You just can not believe your eyes You drift on through reality Save your thoughts But share with me You seem to dance You seem to dive You just can not believe your eyes Your mesmerized this time for sure You just can't keep it in no more I feel your heart pound madly Your so excited By treasures laying at your door And your eyes are still golden Ready for anything Embrace life that's for sure Step into your boots Hold hands with crimson skies Forever And ever So beautiful You seem to dance You seem to dive You just can not believe your eyes You drift on through reality Save your thoughts But share with me You seem to dance You seem to dive You just can not believe your eyes Your mesmerized this time for sure You just can't keep it in no more By Emma Buckeridge 25.09.2011 Copyright 2011

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Date: 9/29/2011 12:57:00 PM
Nice and beautiful words... thanks ,..p.d.
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Date: 9/29/2011 9:06:00 AM
I am very happy to have been able to read your poetry today Emma. I do not have a lot of words to comment on it but I want you to know I did read it. Every poem as with every poet has a different meaning and I do not wish to misinterpert your poetry. I do love reading poetry here and I get inspiration from others poetry which enables me to write new poetry myself. There are lots of wonderful people who give great comments here and I hope they all read your poetry and comment. Love, Carol
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Emma Buckeridge
Date: 9/29/2011 11:03:00 AM
Carol, thank you for your lovely comment. You are right, this site is such an inspirational place to be. There are many great poets on here. Thanks again. Emma

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