Crimson Rose

She walks alone down the dusty road
On a night without a moon
She knows if he ever finds her
That her life will end, too soon

For now he knows of her infidelity
That she's hidden from him for years
She pulls her hair back out of her eyes
And she wipes away her tears

"I still love you", she softly mumbles 
As his car pulls by her side
He says, "Get in the car, we need to talk"
As he takes her for a ride

He says, "I love you too, we can work this out"
For he loved her way too much
He reaches for her tear-stained hand
Cause he's aching to feel her touch

She smiles and take his hand
Not expecting it to end like this
They lean across the seat
And embrace in a passionate kiss

He grabs her wrist and won't let go
As she sees the coming light
He aims his car in oncoming traffic
As he holds her, oh, so tight

"Why are you doing this?, she asked
He said, "Because of all of your lies"
The last thing she heard him say
Was "I love you" and then she dies

It took them several hours
To clean up the twisted mess
When they found her husband's body
He had her picture on his chest

A note was found beside him
That told of her affair
It said if he couldn't have her 
He wasn't going to share

Why it had to end like this?
No one truly knows
But the place where they found her body
Stands, a crimson rose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Taylor Avatar
April 11, 2010 at 7:49 AM
What tragic story. Gruesome.
Orschell Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 6:36 PM
Oh My Gosh! That's so amazing how you put that all together...It was really sad, but it was really amazing all the same...
Roberts Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 6:30 PM
very powerful poetry, well done
Mckenzie Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Larry~ WOW I love the way you told this story love the flow and I'll tell you this should be a movie my friend very riveting all the way to the end. Going to my favorites! Laura :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace