Crimson

The air is heavy with musk

                That deep sensual scent that wraps around

   The mind and chokes away sanity

It smothers the smell of sweat and cheap perfume

As he tries to wipe her crimson from his

  Starched white collar

He throws some lifeblood in red-light's direction

          He doesn't see her drink his life blood

   Doesn't feel

Anything

When

(Standing on a raining corner)

    She asks another man to bleed for her

                So this man too can taste her crimson

He's there staring in the streaked mirror

in a cheap

motel bathroom

Wiping at the collar

                Wiping at the evidence

Trying to hide

Behind the flashing neon lights that filter through

                The cracked venetian blinds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Nissen Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Provokes very strong emotions! Good poem!
Laliberty Avatar
July 24, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Thanks very much :{D
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:21 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today of the seasoned poets and the new poets. I am happy I was able to read your poetry today Rachel. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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