Criminal

he suffered daily
killed his tormentor and smiled~
criminal was born
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Macfarlane Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Unfortunately many are turned into criminals by such torment, Great write. Hugs
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Thanks, Love and Hugs. Rama
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:38 AM
Sad. It happens. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Sad indeed. Thanks for visit and comments. Have a great day. Regards Rama
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 5:49 PM
A haunting smile if ever there was. Nicely penned, Rama. Best wishes, Gershon
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:41 PM
Thanks. Happiness one gets in killing a tormentor is immense. Thanks for the positive comment. Have a great day ahead. Take care. Regards Rama
Kauffman Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Bullying does beget criminals - striking out in pain! Very wise - very nice work my friend. Good luck in the contest. Blessings!
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:40 PM
Thanks I believe no one is born criminals, society and family create criminals. Thanks. Have a great day ahead friend. Take care. Regards Rama
One Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 1:16 PM
I think justice prevailed..
Balasubramanian Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Although it is not right but many times circumstances force you to sin. Take care. Have a great day ahead. Regards Rama
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