Criminal

he suffered daily killed his tormentor and smiled~ criminal was born

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Date: 11/11/2020 8:06:00 PM

Unfortunately many are turned into criminals by such torment, Great write. Hugs

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/14/2020 8:18:00 PM

Thanks, Love and Hugs. Rama

Date: 11/10/2020 11:38:00 AM

Sad. It happens. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/14/2020 8:18:00 PM

Sad indeed. Thanks for visit and comments. Have a great day. Regards Rama

Date: 11/9/2020 5:49:00 PM

A haunting smile if ever there was. Nicely penned, Rama. Best wishes, Gershon

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/9/2020 8:41:00 PM

Thanks. Happiness one gets in killing a tormentor is immense. Thanks for the positive comment. Have a great day ahead. Take care. Regards Rama

Date: 11/9/2020 4:11:00 PM

Bullying does beget criminals - striking out in pain! Very wise - very nice work my friend. Good luck in the contest. Blessings!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/9/2020 8:40:00 PM

Thanks I believe no one is born criminals, society and family create criminals. Thanks. Have a great day ahead friend. Take care. Regards Rama

Date: 11/9/2020 1:16:00 PM

I think justice prevailed..

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 11/9/2020 8:38:00 PM

Although it is not right but many times circumstances force you to sin. Take care. Have a great day ahead. Regards Rama