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Crime On a Gun

a Crime is but a vengeful word that splits us open like a cadaver impairing our '''Normal routine with vengeance greed impure thoughts that leave our neighborhoods in fear the rage that is felt only suppressed to us with pain not able to express not able to relive not able to control the unjust use of armories the use of a G......U......N

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/7/2012 4:09:00 AM
Nice shape poem - serious theme. The unjust use of guns can never be understated.
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Date: 7/6/2012 5:36:00 AM
loved this poem,I live in Jamaica where people think its the easiest way to solve problems,great write Jermaine,love the design....
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Jermaine Kirimi
Date: 7/6/2012 5:52:00 AM
been listening to news of late and all they talk about is crime ,guns were found too much but Mr palmer do keep safe

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