Jermaine Kirimi Poet Shape

Crime On a Gun

a     Crime is but a vengeful word that splits us open like a cadaver impairing our
                '''Normal routine with vengeance greed impure thoughts that leave our 
          neighborhoods in fear the rage that is felt only suppressed to us with pain
       not able to express
    not able to relive 
  not able to control
  the unjust use
  of armories
  the use of a
  G......U......N

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Vicky Tsiluma July 7, 2012 at 4:09 AM Nice shape poem - serious theme. The unjust use of guns can never be understated.

Richard Palmer July 6, 2012 at 5:36 AM loved this poem,I live in Jamaica where people think its the easiest way to solve problems,great write Jermaine,love the design.... Jermaine Kirimi July 6, 2012 at 5:52 AM been listening to news of late and all they talk about is crime ,guns were found too much but Mr palmer do keep safe