Kash Poet Poet Rhyme

Crickets' Call

Take a flight
to the tune of this night
listen to the falling dew drops'  song.

How they whisper love talks to the flowers night long
how jingles of silver moon make their love prolonged.

Sound of silence captures one and all
leaves murmur as they fall
crickets' call.

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Contest:Melody of night-Trois par Huit

Sponsor:Nette Onclaud

By:kash poet

Date:26th August 2012

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Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 11:04 AM Hi Kash, Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's NIGHT MELODY---TROIS-par-par par-what a HUIT :-) :-) contest... I love your entry... always~ PD

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 10:27 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Night Melody" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song August 29, 2012 at 5:25 AM Ohh , the ending couplet brought this grand write full circle and with an powerful conclusion...so enjoyed this winner, Kash...anything about night and crickets, I am gonna fall in love! Great work, gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2012 at 7:54 PM Hey, you shared a spot with me, Kash. AWESOME, and congrats.

Joann Grisetti August 28, 2012 at 9:26 AM Really like the dew drops' song. Very good poem. Congratulations.

Carrie Richards August 28, 2012 at 9:12 AM What a delightful poem of night songs!! Love this, Kash!! (Sooo curious about your avatar??......What a wonderful picture...so cute is that little one!! Made me yawn too!:)

Joseph May August 28, 2012 at 8:22 AM congrats on your win Kash

Elizabeth Wesley August 28, 2012 at 7:02 AM They are singing here as I write Kash, one of the first songs of autumn. Lovely,!

Nette Onclaud August 28, 2012 at 6:39 AM oh, you move me, kashi!... congrats on your win in my contest!..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 28, 2012 at 6:16 AM Congratulations Kash on a well deserved win xx

Lee Ramage August 28, 2012 at 6:03 AM You paint a lovely picture, well done Kash. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Len Gasun August 27, 2012 at 9:45 AM I love sounds of crickets, Kash. They're in my poem, Silence. An awesome write about them which play the Melody of the night. I also love the shape of your rhyme. I hope this will win. Good luck and best wishes in the contest!

Connie Marcum Wong August 27, 2012 at 3:16 AM I loved this Kash. I am sure it will do very well a an entry in Nette's contest. A delightful read filled with nature's imagery and sounds.

Delysia Hendricks August 26, 2012 at 11:22 PM Indeed a melodious night you have sketched here. Well done, Kash. The very best of luck to you in the contest. :)

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2012 at 8:13 PM Hello again! Before I go off.

Debbie Guzzi August 26, 2012 at 2:20 PM Good luck Kash! ;) Light & Love

Russell Sivey August 26, 2012 at 12:04 PM You have done quite masterfully with this incredible write my friend! I am impressed with how you put the entire poem together to enhance the reader's senses! An enlightening piece I must say Kashi, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich August 26, 2012 at 11:31 AM VERY nice, Kash. I counted the syllables too. Perfection, my friend!

Nette Onclaud August 26, 2012 at 9:21 AM i'm back from a short holiday, kashi... how art thou??..:)

Jack Ellison August 26, 2012 at 8:50 AM You paint a peaceful picture of the quiet murmurs of the night! Good luck, my friend... cheers, Jack