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Crested Waves

By shadowed lantern light I've written verses about flying fish and Charybdis' guzzling curses; of humpback whales that breach crested waves then plunge to the ocean's depth of watery graves October 16,2020 Gregory Barden's Rithimus Divisa 10 Contest a verse from 'Sailing Mystic Seas' ~ 8/28/20

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/25/2020 7:11:00 PM

Congratulations for your excellent win, Jenna! This awesome piece fills my imagination with majestic imagery. It's a pleasure to share the podium with you, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/25/2020 10:56:00 AM

Marvelous pictures of the sea and oceans, Jenna. Your rhyme flows like the tides. Congratulations on your win!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/25/2020 5:05:00 AM

A great entertaining poem, congratulations on your winning placement Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 5:58:00 AM

Thank you very much for liking it, Tania.

John Watt

Date: 10/25/2020 12:49:00 AM

Dazzling maritime imagery, Jenna. Big congratulations on your win today ~ John

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/25/2020 5:58:00 AM

Thanks so much, John. Have a great Sunday.

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/17/2020 2:58:00 PM

You certainly have a way with words. Great Job Jenna!!

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/22/2020 8:57:00 AM

Thanks so much for your remarks, Mark

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/16/2020 9:12:00 PM

Jenna, what magnificence flows from your gifted pen and marvelous mind. The depth and breadth of your imagery takes my breath away. I adore and admire the grand spirit of your poem. Your poetry inspires me and I’m so happy to see this beauty entered into the contest. Best wishes for a win, dear poetess and warmest wishes for you, dear friend.. ~Susan

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/17/2020 4:58:00 AM

Hi Susan, my newest kindhearted friend. I've entered only because of your thoughts, but I must sincerely admit your entry is far superior. It's all about the comradery, so let's just enjoy it!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2020 4:40:00 PM

such vivid imagery Jenna, a lovely stanza which stand out as a poem in its own right:-) hugs jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 10/16/2020 5:41:00 PM

Your comments, even those made on those of others, are always so encouraging to me, Jan. Thank you for your many generous remarks.