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Crested Waves

By shadowed lantern light I've written verses
about flying fish and Charybdis' guzzling curses;
of humpback whales that breach crested waves
then plunge to the ocean's depth of watery graves



October 16,2020    
Gregory Barden's Rithimus Divisa 10 Contest
a verse from 'Sailing Mystic Seas'  ~   8/28/20

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Susan Ashley

October 25, 2020 at 7:11 PM

Congratulations for your excellent win, Jenna! This awesome piece fills my imagination with majestic imagery. It's a pleasure to share the podium with you, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman

October 25, 2020 at 10:56 AM

Marvelous pictures of the sea and oceans, Jenna. Your rhyme flows like the tides. Congratulations on your win!

Tania Kitchin

October 25, 2020 at 5:05 AM

A great entertaining poem, congratulations on your winning placement Jenna!

Jenna Logan

October 25, 2020 at 5:58 AM

Thank you very much for liking it, Tania.

John Watt

October 25, 2020 at 12:49 AM

Dazzling maritime imagery, Jenna. Big congratulations on your win today ~ John

Jenna Logan

October 25, 2020 at 5:58 AM

Thanks so much, John. Have a great Sunday.

Mark Koplin

October 17, 2020 at 2:58 PM

You certainly have a way with words. Great Job Jenna!!

Jenna Logan

October 22, 2020 at 8:57 AM

Thanks so much for your remarks, Mark

Susan Ashley

October 16, 2020 at 9:12 PM

Jenna, what magnificence flows from your gifted pen and marvelous mind. The depth and breadth of your imagery takes my breath away. I adore and admire the grand spirit of your poem. Your poetry inspires me and I’m so happy to see this beauty entered into the contest. Best wishes for a win, dear poetess and warmest wishes for you, dear friend.. ~Susan

Jenna Logan

October 17, 2020 at 4:58 AM

Hi Susan, my newest kindhearted friend. I've entered only because of your thoughts, but I must sincerely admit your entry is far superior. It's all about the comradery, so let's just enjoy it!