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Crescent Waltz

She slants her shining, golden glance Across desert, mountains, rivers, plants Greets her rising, true romance In the purpling, opposite skies Her lunar love, her heart’s delight Soars to ever darker height For each, the other’s perfect, right It’s on their wings time flies She seems asleep within the night Yet always, somewhere, she’s brilliant, bright Motionless in constant flight Each day its own surprise They’ll never meet – there’s not a chance These partners in eternal dance Of darkness, light – they both enhance The world with their long goodbyes *** As their crescent waltz achieves crescendo Sans artifice or innuendo Young children start to play Nintendo While adults stir and rise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/27/2009 5:43:00 AM
I am ravished by the beauty of this poem ... a favorite now ... congratulations on itbeing featured.
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:26:00 PM
Awwwww this is beautiful ... loved it ... Love Jayne :D
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Rebecca. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 5:32:00 PM
Rebecca so wonderful to read you again. Congrats on this most excellent featured write. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:25:00 PM
Congrats on the winning tail-rhyme being re-featured. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:46:00 AM
Congrats once again as you are being honoured once again with another feature of the week. We can’t get this kind of well deserved honour else where other than poetrysoup. Keep writing, you are a great poet… Leke
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured piece of art. More success and power. Ernilando
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Date: 5/24/2009 4:35:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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