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Crescent moonbeams easterly Red sun against blue, rises. Hope today comes leisurely! Today showers are prizes. Rain helps beans to develop. Whip-poor-will's song supreme Humidity envelops Those eastern crescent moonbeams
Another try at Ae Freislighe (aye, freshly) 7 syllables per line lines 1 and 3 rhyme with a 3 syllable ending word lines 2 and 4 rhyme with a two syllable ending word The first line's beginning phrase ends the last stanza. You can go on and on with stanzas, but the last line of the last stanza has to end with the first lines beginning phrase. Its theme is supposed to be about nature...

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Date: 6/18/2023 3:57:00 AM
love the way you've put so much detail into this - really must try an 'aye, freshly'
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2023 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visits. Sara
Date: 5/30/2023 1:15:00 PM
well, it looks like you are handling that form just fine. I enjoyed this one, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2023 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Quite a compliment you have given. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara
Date: 5/19/2023 12:37:00 PM
Very good poem! I enjoyed all the imagery about the rain to come and the moon to shine...!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2023 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Paige. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 5/17/2023 6:36:00 PM
Fresh as a cooling breeze, Sara!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/18/2023 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the affirmation of my work. Sara
Date: 5/16/2023 1:56:00 AM
Lovely poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/16/2023 3:20:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

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