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Crescent Moonbeams

Crescent moonbeams easterly
Red sun against blue, rises.
Hope today comes leisurely! 
Today showers are prizes.

Rain helps beans to develop.
Whip-poor-will's song supreme
Humidity envelops
Those eastern crescent moonbeams     


Another try at Ae Freislighe (aye, freshly)
7 syllables per line
lines 1 and 3 rhyme with a 3 syllable ending word
lines 2 and 4 rhyme with a two syllable ending word
The first line's beginning phrase ends the last stanza. 
You can go on and on with stanzas, but the last line of the last stanza has to end with the first lines beginning phrase. 
Its theme is supposed to be about nature...

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Jack Horne June 18, 2023 at 3:57 AM love the way you've put so much detail into this - really must try an 'aye, freshly' Sara Kendrick June 18, 2023 at 7:41 AM Thank you, Jack. I appreciate the visits. Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2023 at 1:15 PM well, it looks like you are handling that form just fine. I enjoyed this one, Sara. Sara Kendrick May 30, 2023 at 1:43 PM Thank you, Andrea. Quite a compliment you have given. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara

Paige Hind May 19, 2023 at 12:37 PM Very good poem! I enjoyed all the imagery about the rain to come and the moon to shine...! Sara Kendrick May 19, 2023 at 12:45 PM Thank you, Paige. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Gershon Wolf May 17, 2023 at 6:36 PM Fresh as a cooling breeze, Sara! Sara Kendrick May 18, 2023 at 3:24 AM Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the affirmation of my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar May 16, 2023 at 1:56 AM Lovely poem. Sara Kendrick May 16, 2023 at 3:20 AM Thank you, Victor. Your visits are uplifting. Sara