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Your Best Ever Creative Haiku Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Andrea Dietrich. Date: 05/10/2024. Originally written: 05/01/2016

Crescent Moon Frowning


       crescent moon frowning
it seems, from my vantage point ~
                                     p
                                     u
             my head tilted 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 7:52 PM
This was one of the most creative ones in my contest. Congrats
Thomas Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Lol well you've touched on two things that I love the most in nature; rain, in your other piece, and the Moon! That makes you awesome in my book! Lol appreciated this Edward :)
Ibeh Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, FJ! I'm glad you liked it:-)
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Congrats. Sara
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Thanks, Sara:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:15 PM
All perspective! Congrats!
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Fun to see it that way! Congrats on your interesting haiku!
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Glad you liked it, Andrea. Thank you!:-)
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Imagery is picturesque, Edward, nicely done, congratulations on your win !
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:08 PM
Thank you very much, Eve:-)
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Congrats on your win, Edward. A most interesting perspective.
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:11 PM
Thanks, Line. Much appreciated:-)
Callus Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Congrats on your win, Edward. An interesting neck-breaking 3 liner. // paul
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thanks, Paul.
Beachboard Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 3:14 PM
This is a delightful haiku. It leaves me smiling each time I read it. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so much, Deborah...
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