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crescent moon

crescent moon reading
love messages in the night
~ distance subsiding



AP: 1st place 2026

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John Fleming

August 21, 2025 at 11:00 AM

Another cleverly constructed Senryu. I don't know if I am correct in assuming...but when I read it...it seems as though the act of the Moon reading the messages brings the two lovers closer together...not just in a metaphyiscal sense...but in a very real sort of physical sense as well. A bit longwinded I know...but its the best way I can explain it. Cheers! :) john

Line Gauthier

August 21, 2025 at 6:42 PM

absolutely ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John ~