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crescent moon 

crescent moon reading
love messages in the night
~ distance subsiding

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John Fleming
Date: 8/21/2025 11:00:00 AM
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Another cleverly constructed Senryu. I don't know if I am correct in assuming...but when I read it...it seems as though the act of the Moon reading the messages brings the two lovers closer together...not just in a metaphyiscal sense...but in a very real sort of physical sense as well. A bit longwinded I know...but its the best way I can explain it. Cheers! :) john
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2025 6:42:00 PM
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absolutely ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John ~
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Abdullah Alhemaidy
Date: 8/20/2025 1:27:00 PM
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Very nice read! Cute moon!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2025 6:42:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Abdullah ~
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/20/2025 9:47:00 AM
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subtle, soft, and romantic
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2025 6:42:00 PM
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Much appreciated, Sara ~

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