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Margarita Lillico, sponsor, September 2, 2026

Crescendo of the Years (What Matters)

At five, the world is leisurely and small,  
tiny enough to fit inside my hand~  
a pebble pocketed from the sidewalk,  
a leaf, the outside world, I innocently understand

At fifteen, the world is hurried and expanding, 
tilting toward faces in crowded halls~  
I ponder who I’m becoming, studying
the mirror and glances steadying schoolroom walls.

At thirty, the world is broadening, the hours frantic,    
asking for purpose in their spin and span~  
the invisible but deliberate shaping  
of the burgeoning person I began.

At fifty, the world is stable, days balanced and clear:  
what shall stay, what shall fall away~  
I keep the people and moments that ring true  
and let what remains dissipate and decay.

At seventy, the world is unsteady, the pace softening slow:
the morning opens wide~
small moments, bright with quiet grace,
find room to rest inside.
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September 2, 2026 at 5:24 AM
A beautifully structured life-arc poem, with each age widening—and then gently refining—its sense of what the world holds. The recurring opening gives it a satisfying crescendo, while the final quieter stanza makes an especially graceful resolution.
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