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Crescendo of Love Poem2

music
                                        aching, longing
                                   sacred romance kindled
                            l yrical expression heart’s journey
                                              Psalmist    








 Written by: Lori Marie McClure      9/9/11
  For Nette Oclaud's contest: Melody of Cinquain

Copyright © Lori Lucas Mcclure | Year Posted 2011

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George Aul Date: 9/13/2011 2:31:00 PM Congrats on your win........George Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/12/2011 8:59:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lori Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 9/12/2011 4:30:00 PM congrats on your win in the contest, a lovely romantic cinquain :-) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/12/2011 9:09:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Lori. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/11/2011 4:09:00 PM Congrats Lori on your win in the contest...enjoyed very much.... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/11/2011 3:05:00 PM Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/11/2011 3:42:00 AM Lori, many congrats on your brilliant win..David Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 9/11/2011 1:20:00 AM congratulations Lori. Well done. cheers Marg Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/10/2011 11:21:00 PM Congrats Lori on sweet success with this brilliant beauty Cinquain luv.. Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/10/2011 10:34:00 PM Congrats on your win, Lori! Kim Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 9/10/2011 9:26:00 PM Great work, congratulations on your win. Lee Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/9/2011 2:40:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..One of the best..Winning material for sure..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 9/9/2011 2:35:00 PM This is very nice Lori...check syllable count of 4th line please...should be 8 but here it is 9...regards. Login to Reply Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/9/2011 2:52:00 PM Thank you again and this is getting comical I use the scite I mention in the ealier post to you and it says 8 syllables. I don't know why it would be different!!! I 'm going to just let it ride! I can't keep changing it! Lol I'd be here all day!!LOL there will be other contests and having fellow poets comment is as wonderful as winning a contest. Thanks again I appreciate it---Lori

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/9/2011 2:31:00 PM I want to apologize to everyone concerning my poem Crescendo of Love I had to alter it in Crescendo of Love #2 for Nette Oclaud's contest syllable count was wrong. I thank each of you who read the original verson and commented. Thank you again and sorry for change.---Lori Login to Reply