Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Cinquain

Crescendo of Love Poem2

music
                                        aching, longing
                                   sacred romance kindled
                            l yrical expression heart’s journey
                                              Psalmist    








 Written by: Lori Marie McClure      9/9/11
  For Nette Oclaud's contest: Melody of Cinquain

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George Aul September 13, 2011 at 2:31 PM Congrats on your win........George

Dr.Ram Mehta September 12, 2011 at 8:59 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette,Lori

Charlotte Puddifoot September 12, 2011 at 4:30 PM congrats on your win in the contest, a lovely romantic cinquain :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 9:09 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Melody Of Cinquain" contest Lori. Love, Carol

Kash Poet September 11, 2011 at 4:09 PM Congrats Lori on your win in the contest...enjoyed very much....

Sara Kendrick September 11, 2011 at 3:05 PM Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

David Williams September 11, 2011 at 3:42 AM Lori, many congrats on your brilliant win..David

Margaret Foster September 11, 2011 at 1:20 AM congratulations Lori. Well done. cheers Marg

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2011 at 11:21 PM Congrats Lori on sweet success with this brilliant beauty Cinquain luv..

Kim Merryman September 10, 2011 at 10:34 PM Congrats on your win, Lori! Kim

Lee Ramage September 10, 2011 at 9:26 PM Great work, congratulations on your win. Lee

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2011 at 2:40 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work..One of the best..Winning material for sure..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Kash Poet September 9, 2011 at 2:35 PM This is very nice Lori...check syllable count of 4th line please...should be 8 but here it is 9...regards. Lori Lucas Mcclure September 9, 2011 at 2:52 PM Thank you again and this is getting comical I use the scite I mention in the ealier post to you and it says 8 syllables. I don't know why it would be different!!! I 'm going to just let it ride! I can't keep changing it! Lol I'd be here all day!!LOL there will be other contests and having fellow poets comment is as wonderful as winning a contest. Thanks again I appreciate it---Lori

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 9, 2011 at 2:31 PM I want to apologize to everyone concerning my poem Crescendo of Love I had to alter it in Crescendo of Love #2 for Nette Oclaud's contest syllable count was wrong. I thank each of you who read the original verson and commented. Thank you again and sorry for change.---Lori