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Crepuscular Rays of Horizon

Yonder the stars in the sky, My mind's imagination flew high. To seems I never dreamed cry But someone knocks and made me sigh. At first I thought those were jokes And think to play out of it choke But I went out of control; To never hold the push it pulls. Yesterday I was just a no-no Today I become a so-so And tomorrow will I be a yo-yo? Or a something that will be in limbo? Yet, I was once a dream To you I was full of gleam That glow in a nights tame. Never shed the rays it scream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 7:29:00 PM
Remelan, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem FEATURED on the soups Home Page:-). Good-Night **Linda**
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Remelan Nepomuceno
Date: 11/28/2016 2:26:00 PM
Thanks Linda, haven't thought that one of my poems will be featured. There are a lot of amazing poems here. Feeling lucky and blessed,
Date: 8/30/2013 4:45:00 PM
a beauty it is. Remelan, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat
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Remelan Nepomuceno
Date: 11/28/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thanks, wanted to go back here, again.
Date: 8/29/2013 7:43:00 AM
Good morning Remelan, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Remelan Nepomuceno
Date: 11/28/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 8/29/2013 6:32:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Remelan ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Remelan Nepomuceno
Date: 8/29/2013 6:34:00 AM
Hello! Thanks for the Anne. I will. - Have a blessed day!

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