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On a commercial on TV they said that this special cream will get rid of the crepe paper skin..LOL..

C rinkley lines upon angel wings R ippling in air to songs that ring E ntertain some people as they view P eevish part of the body fair E arth bound wings some despair P alsied shaking covered in summer A bashed the feelings when wings don't become her P assable but beauty now flawed E dwardian dress now applaud R emember when it happens a bummer

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Date: 5/23/2016 1:14:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
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Date: 5/23/2016 8:58:00 AM
Ohhhhhh I know the feeling so well. When young I pumped a little iron and was in great shape. Operative word -- WAS. Now it all sort of hangs. Great write and fun read. God Bless, JB
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/23/2016 9:05:00 AM
It happens and kind of slips up on us doesn't it..Thanks for the visits..Sara
Date: 5/21/2016 5:43:00 PM
OH MY!! What an interesting one to write about, Sara. I do weight lifting and it really helps. It's never to late to get started!!! I enjoyed this.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/22/2016 6:09:00 AM
I lift weights as well taking laundry baskets full of clothing up and down the basement steps, lifting pots and pans in the kitchen, picking up Chihuahuas, etc..LOL..Every women works out every day with all the chores at home..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 5/20/2016 5:24:00 PM
Hey Sara this is so different from you, just love the theme the poem, everything.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2016 6:32:00 AM
Saw an ad on TV and it set the brain to twirling...LOL..It is not funny to have those kind of wings though..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Date: 5/19/2016 7:00:00 AM
"Angel wings". Well-said and well satirized, Sara. Great poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/21/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thanks so much for your compliments..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara
Date: 5/18/2016 10:48:00 PM
I heard of this cream. I don't know why but it scares me to know this is a real name for skin...Hugs. LINDA
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2016 6:08:00 AM
It doesn't happen to everyone..Some women are more muscular which is a good thing..If one gains and looses weight many times it seems to increase this to happen..Certain body types as well..My mother had it really bad...Now my mother's arm comes through my sleeve..LOL..Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the continued support of my work..Sara

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