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The shadows were creeping like golden summer, Upon arising covertly, from crimson dawn mists, And they shrank at noon to a realm just under, Then idly resumed, their daring sunshine risks, 'Til plum twilight, and a kingdom they'd missed! Written on August 11, 2021 For: A BRIAN STRAND 4 or 5 line Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 8/13/2021 4:52:00 PM
An aura of mystery just hangs over, under, around and through this beauty, Evelyn. I like it for the contest! Happy weekend, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/13/2021 6:29:00 PM
Thank you for your appreciation, Gershon. It makes me feel just super. Hope yours is a wonderful weekend, too, Evelyn
Date: 8/12/2021 3:19:00 AM
Shadows disappear at noon and awesome way to describe it, Evelyn:)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/12/2021 11:01:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jo. :)
Date: 8/12/2021 2:14:00 AM
I like the idea of a creeping shadow. I love sundown too. Hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/12/2021 11:03:00 AM
Nature is full of delights. Thank you. Hugs

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