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CREEP

Stretching outwards,
  knees,
stretched tight;
  The wind beneath you,
  as you journey through this flight...

Soaring downward,
   releasing the free;
Moment suspended,
        only,
for you to see...

Shaking off the water,
   in the cold winter night;
  Floating, unnoticed;
As you focus upon the light...

    The treasure of not knowing,
the anticipation, of no belief;
   Slowly, through the darkness,
     you creep...

Note: This piece has had 310 reads, yet only 2 comments. can anyone tell me why?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/24/2012 9:11:00 PM
Nice descriptive write! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/22/2012 10:34:00 PM
Interesting verse...what are we talking about here? Reminds me of My "Bang Bang Someone's Dead"... Good write no matter the night swim. Cynthia
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Terry Cunningham
Date: 8/23/2012 7:12:00 AM
Actually, it is. It's a suicide flight from a bridge over the colorado river.. just thought's on the cusp of death, that moment into the crossover. I hope to have maybe have 2 more parts to it eventually. Thank you for reading; TC