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Creek Rise

cloud lies low adhering to spider web fog
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kerr Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 6:49 PM
Excellent word choice, imagery that attracts immediate attention and compelling story that reads well. Your insights on Tamper Proof Exemplar much appreciated Howard
Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Nature and her various hues....
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma, for the nice review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:18 AM
Dear Sara, not many will write on a spider's web. Very evocative.
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Victor, I was out watering my plants and walked into a dew soak spider web and it is no fun so I decided to write a poem. LOL..Weird thinking I know. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:48 PM
I do enjoy Lanterne's and yours is beautiful, Sara K! Liked the image too, hugs and blessings, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 2:54 AM
Thank you, Sara B. Even though they are short and don't have to rhyme, they are not so easy to write. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:29 PM
An impressive work of art a spider web, Sara :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your visits are encouraging. Sara K
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