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Image result for pictures of foggy mist rising from a creek and on plants in spring

thick creek rise joins fog deposits its presence upon everything coating with a shroud mist the fern lace fennel looks like white cotton candy or a loosely woven white cotton blanket drip, drip, drop sounds adds to the eeriness time is short outside so few minutes to enjoy God's glorious world but day's responsibilities call thank you, God a moment in time with You helps me make it through the day

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Date: 6/13/2025 6:09:00 AM
Hi Sara, An imaginative piece whose step wise elegance reveals a stunning backdrop. Thank you so much for your encouraging remarks on Coffee Break. Howard
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/13/2025 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Howard. I am delighted that you like the layout as well as what is written. Sara K
Date: 5/15/2025 8:31:00 AM
Your last stanza is a wonderful poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/13/2025 4:46:00 PM
Your comment shows your faith, Victor. It is nice to know you believe as well. Sara K
Date: 5/13/2025 6:54:00 AM
Very nice! I especially like verse 2 and your moment with God!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/13/2025 4:45:00 PM
Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

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