Creature's Comfort...

a creature i am 
hidden far away
darkness around me
in the guise of day
swimming in matters
of colored chatter
viewing life
in a form of water.

“what can turn the water to wine”
“a current flowing from the base of your spine”
.
Creator’s comfort
returns from sublime…
Created a creature
that it called Divine…
yet what have we done?
but labeled it ‘mine’.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ryerson Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 4:54 AM
Very intense and moving, Izzy...."darkness around me in the guise of day'"... I have been there before! - Tim
Gumbo Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:28 PM
... and oh, so dramatic sometimes, I yam. ;) xo
Gumbo Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:17 PM
my heart is hurting... I don't know why, but I hear whales these days... xo thank you for your support and comforting words. I'm in mourning.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:15 PM
Are we in "power mode" today with this excellent and brilliant write?... amazing words Izzy and super beyond compare.. luv the asterick lines... intense.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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