Creator's Design

shining sparkling lights
                                   in spacious free window screen
                                          spin in black abyss 
 
                                           magnificent view
                                     of radiant flux's huge hue 
                                            creator's design
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deschler Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Such magnificent imagery in just a few brief lines! A wonderful pair of haiku, BL!
Devnath  Avatar
October 24, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment with nice appreciation. Loved always,bl
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 9:17 AM
- This is beautiful, dear Bl ! (7) - Best wishes for a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 1:36 PM
Thanks for your beautiful comment and 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 6:36 PM
very pretty imagery!
Devnath  Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 8:13 AM
Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always,bl
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